I love haiku's. I used to write them all the time and now I just don't. But anyway, I think this is more of a tanka. The same style as a haiku, but written about emotion. As a haiku is supposed to be written about nature.
Anyway, I liked this. It came across as fresh, and left me with a smile on my face.
This is relatable and the middle line is descriptive and unique.
Sorry there isn't much more I can comment on this, but I sure enjoyed it. (:

Well done,
Tammie.

This is really a great tanka. I love your poems Michael. Keep on writing....always and forever.

Wonderful piece. :) I love it! 5/5

Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyday was filled with smiles and laughter :)
Loved this!
Take care
Cindy

I love this type of poetry because it makes your think more about the meaning than when it is displayed by actual words. Good job 5/5

Beautiful imagery and use of a metaphor. You have done an excellent on this short form to make the message meaningful!