Comments : GOD'S UNFAILING LOVE

  • 11 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    GReat peom just one thought instead of The term "we" & "us" use "she" &"her" lik for example.

    "He loves her,when she hates him"

    iit would rele help & make the poem much better =)

  • 9 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Awesome read; keep it up, girl! 5/5