Noor,
Your poems are always so intense, I love their deepness, so wow and profound!! :)

Greek mythology is an enthraling topic, so vast and meaty. .....sassy too, like only you can portray in such a shrouded way *winks*

Well done

Michael

This is really sad :(..why cant they just wait..but since he didnt then he doesnt deserve 2 be upset 4..keep writing..wish u'll find the right person who'll wait 4 u :)..

Great! Loved it! What a magnificent way to describe feelings. To me it's a great writing. I loved the lines and the words! Very well done!