Very touching, I sure many could relate. I love the heart and message you put into this poem, 5/5.

-mandy :)

"behinde this skin is my real self"
`behind not behinde...

"Behind these lie are the true"
`I'd reword it..
Behind these lies, is the truth.

"You look at me see smile but not knowing that smile is lie"
`Woah. Confusing wording. Maybe a comma or something would help me understand where your thoughts seperate?

Confused not confuzed

Umm, its a short thought that could be expanded so much. You only told like 2 things about yourself in this poem, and I think that there's so much more that you could say. Needs improvement. 4/5.

A very short piece but full of inspiring thoughts,, actually behind that poem its just also like me... coz i've behind of that story most of the time.... i like this very touching 5/5