Comments : Get Up Now

  • 11 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Ah yes the rocky paths of life. I think I have seen this person in a few lifetimes. Nice poem and a good choice of words to express it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Wow, very nice, i am a fan. great ryhme scheme

  • 11 years ago

    by Laith

    The rocks get hit by the waves.
    Yet, they remain rocks.
    It is hope that makes us stand on our feet.
    Despite life's everlasting shocks.

    I tell you, in the end, fortitude is what we gain.
    Through life's endless pains.
    Just like the grass always grows harder.
    Under the brutal, heavy rains.

    these are so good that when I read them I feel so fragile but yet so strong you are amazing... I hope we comunicate soon cause you are worth knowing.

  • 11 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    This is amazing!

    Realli realli good!

    Verii well done.


  • 11 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Well, it's of the nicest poems i've ever read! yes, simple and meaningful.. keep it up 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was beautiful. I literally cried.
    Laugh if you want, haha, but this just really spoke to me.
    True talent. I may not know a lot about writing, but I truly felt this was amazing.