Title is too lovely! I love the words. It tastes good. Love needs to be born again... Going around the circle. Love can forgive so much. Heart can be healed up.

Loneliness...it is something against human nature. We can be alone for a while but needs down the soul...every soul is calling the other half to enjoy it and makes life perfect...

Very nice poem with deep meaning.

Well, I think it is a lovely piece. I can tell by the couple grammatical errors, that English is not your first language. None the less, It was nicely done.

Sourav
What a beautiful love poem. I love your word choices and imagery.

Forgiven by lights of the heart
A thousand tears dry out fast
Dreams again start building castle in the air

I love the thought of the cstles in the air. Great image for the minds eye.

Hopes begin to grow layer by layer
Dismal faith finds the glimpse of a ray
Life takes a long breath after virulent decay

These lines give that little chance of loves return.

Thirsty soul was alone long enough -
In the glory of joy, is the reincarnation of love.

The coming together og love the greatest part.
Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

Wow what a poem.... loved reading it.. keep it up sourav

Well good work in reincarnation of love. I hope it can happen with every one.

Nice use of words for expressing the joy of love. Nice Sourav

Hi Saurav,

I kept my words of reading your poems. Hahaha.

Coming back to the actual comments on this poem, I have to confess that I am reading a poem of this genre for the first time. It took me reading twice to understand the last half of the poems but I guess your poem was successful in making me understand its meaning. A very good use of vocabulary. I could actually feel understanding the depth of the words that you have use.

My seniors in this website have always told me that if your poem succeeds in making the readers live the poem by visualization, then you have won the critics.

Wow! This poem is splendid. Keep writing. I am looking forward to read your other poems.

Regards,
Bhavin

"Thirsty soul was alone long enough -
In the glory of joy, is the reincarnation of love.",,,very good part, no rhyme-but still have good stanza,,

I enjoyed reading your poetry. I especially liked how it all made sense with the last line.

WOW ! Sourav every line of the poem is very true... Its just amazing ..
5/5
Biya

Hey thanks for reading my poem.

I really like this poem. Its beautiful. i love the rhyming and the ending line is great. By favorite line is "Life takes a long breath after virulent decay" great job.