Comments : RRR (acrostic)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Wow. This poem is stunning, I'm at a loss of words to describe the beauty of it. Wonderfully written. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Great job with this. An acrostic is quite hard to do while managing to make the whole poem have meaning. I love the imagery in the beginning lines, as the reader comes to the middle, it becomes more personal, and you let the reader get a glimpse of your life. The ending lines were my favorite. Great write. 5/5 :) Keep writing!

    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Splendid. The acrostic wrote in meaningful poem even it was hard to do but you still managed it...
    well, deserve to rate excellent!
    5/5-C