Uhm....WOW! The flow here was so flawless. I love how you began it, you captured my attention and had me wanting to read more. The imagery and descriptions you had throughout the poem truly brought this piece to life for me. The truth shined in everything you said and every line was packed with meaning. I could relate to the words you wrote making this more of a joy to read. The rhyming was excellent with nothing being forced which made it easy to read. I couldnt pick out one line that I loved the most becaue it was all so flawlessly written and beautiful. I loved this. I'm nominating for the weekly contest...you deserve it.

Well done.
*5/5*