Comments : You asked me to stop breathing

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    The last line is extremely powerful and perfect ending! :]

    I love this, but remember... you don't need to change for ANYONE, but rather find someone who accepts you for who You are, not what they WANT you to become :]

  • 15 years ago

    by XXXNellieXXX

    Aww thank u but with him, god save my soul and my mind, i'm always trying to do what's best

  • 15 years ago

    by CrossCut

    This poem ended so powerfully and it was great. I loved the range of emotion you put into it and again, the ending just ended it perfectly. Great work, keep writing!

  • 15 years ago

    by XXXNellieXXX

    Thanks

  • 15 years ago

    by BUSSEYBABY

    I love this, i'm goin to fav this