"Sitting in blank spaces in my own room.
Dreaming of salvation that lingers on."

I really enjoyed your opening lines, they made me want to read further, which is definite plus. Nice work.

"What can there be for me to kill this time.
Killing is crime,Is killing time a crime?"

I really enjoyed these as well especially when you ask if killing time is a crime.

Thanks so much for entering my contest, I enjoyed your poem, keep up the good work.