I think you did a pretty good job, I'm not much of a fan of rapping so I can't tell you if you're really good or if you're terrible.. I guess only other rappers would be able to tell you an honest opinion on that. The rhymign was really good and the flow was really good, the only thing I would have wished for was a stronger ending, it didn't really wow me all that much. Otherwise, I think you did a fabulous job. 5/5 (: