Oh this is nothing but dark!! is this suppose to be funny? anyway great job of portraying the voice and what it does... really glad i read it. :) 5/5

Wow I honestly feel terribly sorry for those people who expereince "the voice". That must be confusing and irritating. But the poem is well written, very discriptive, I forgot where I was for a minute cuz I was so lost in the poem. Nice job

Yeee, it was as if it was written for me. But...I will never kill myself, I love music too much ;-)