Its really nice... the rymes ... the way you put the words as well... and in the end everyone was sasfe...

i atcually had an image in my mind, while i was reaeding!!

good job

Very clear picture you depicted!!! awesome job!!!!

That's nott funny. buh gud peom

Poem* lolz ;p

I'm with Ashley. I didn't see the humour in it, but it did fit the "for kids" sub-heading superbly. A very delicate but powerful piece, I thoroughly enjoyed.