Comments : Anonymous

  • 15 years ago

    by x Mo x

    It feels like it's missing something. Like it's missing a bit of emotion. Don't get me wrong, it's still an awesome poem and I enjoyed reading it. I just wish it had a little more description. I had a hard time catching it in my mind. I'd get a glance at the feeling behind it, but then just as fast as it came it would be gone.
    Good write though!
    -Mo-

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Love it but more the flow
    but a little bit descriptions k
    but love it great job (^_^) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    It's good, if I may say. You have a lot of potential! Some lines didn't fit as well, particually the longer ones, but it is overall a poem that gets the message across. Isn't that the most important thing?