Wow i'm so sorry.. this poem is beautifully written, i'm sure he's smiling down at you right now :]

5/5

no flaws here sweetie

Trully court it is one of your best

i join my voice with you and say R.I.P ,

vote you 5 5

Very sad, I'm sorry for your loss. The poem was obviously full of emotion, and under the circumstances it would be horrible if it wasn't. Everyone should write with emotion like this at least once. You did a nice job with this. Good work.

It was great I really liked it and I'm so sorry about your dad. there are ways I relate to this poem even if my dad hasn't passed away. but your poem was beautiful and you are a very tallented writer and I love your work.

This was well written.
and im sorry about your dad.
you will always have those memories.
even if you don't rewind the tape.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.