:] ohh yes haha

beautiful.. love it!

Wow....very explicit. well written. u must have a very hot, kinky wife ;) feel blessed, lol

^^Get off your high horse, Emily. That poem wasn't disgusting. lol

It thought it was pretty good, myself. Um, hmm... let's just say I could see everything I was reading. :)

Awesome dude... <333

Awesome dude... <333

Awesome dude... <333

I thought that this was a good poem. I think that if u would have broken it up in2 stanza's it would have been easier 2 read but it was good. I liked how u brought the tittle in at like the last minute, very creative.

Damn that made me horny...lol

LOL very goood haha but yeah d last part kinda disturbed meee kumin in her face not very nice lol but wow everyfin else was great =]

5/5

Wow.....incredibly hot man!!!!!!!!!

can i tatse that yum yum? lol

SEXY ASS POEM

Thank you very much....im glad you enjoyed it

Wicked:)