This is so close to being something I would have rated a 5, however, the touch of originality just misses...but the poet is talented without question and delivers a right-on content within a familiar theme, not to mention, with nifty aplomb, presents a poem whose flow engulfs the receiver in its embrace and doesn't release to the very end...where it ends right on ending-point, which is not an easy thing to accomplish (even with the best of authors)!