The rhyme and flow of the poem were consistant. Word choice wasn't really there, itw as kind of just simple, but yet it was alright. It was kind of like a story poem, but it still had a rhyme and everything which was great. Emotions and feelings were clear, so great job there. Content of the poem was easy to picture, I could imagine some of it really well. I'm sure it's a poem some people could relate to. So well done. 5/5.
Awsome poem...very sad, but you did a great job putting the feelings into the daily life of a social outcast...I love the part where the person makes a made up story about spening the day with friends...I can relate to that! 5/5
Now this is a poem I can relate to. it's so saddening. I once felt like this and whilst I'm reading this poem as a reader I'm picturing myself as the girl for some reason. For I was once in that situation. Alone, not wanted. As soon as I read the first stanza something inside me clicked and realization sinked in and I thought to myself "God, this sounds like me...."
Keep up the work once again :)