Vow, That was sufficient to bring this Indian out of the cupboard for the celebration, your poems are really marvelous as I heard...

Keep it up.... Anonymous

That's a very good poem!

I really loved the words you chose! I've never seen most of them, let alone in a poem before! The imagery was insanely good, and the warm, happy feeling it gave me was very enjoyable. Thanks for letting me read your poem! It's one of the best I have ever read!

-mo-

RL
Beautiful poem. The imagery is awesome.....The longing for those days when we were young and careefree.....wishing to go back to the place where we knew we were safe and loved :) What a beautiful picture you paint of your childhood home :)
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Great word choice LR and imagery. My only suggestion is:

^Hidden beneath those rocky shores
Youthful pranks of long time before^

I think you need to tweak these to lines a bit. Long time before is not proper grammar. If you said something like :

Hidden beneath the rocky shore
Reminiscing times before........or something like that. Then you are adhering to your rhyme scheme. You did a lovely job!

I liked this...lots of great words. good job!