This poem made me a bit uncomfortable
but still 5/5

Umm, I was a bit confused and maybe that's cuz I'm not used 2 a writer like u. Umm I didn't understand it fully. I couldn't tell if u were raped but 2 a point u liked or u were having scary sex with some1 a lot older than u. It's not that ur a bad writer it's just that I think that u should try 2 be more clear with this piece. Umm but I hope that u don't mind, but I don't really want 2 vote, cuz I wasn't 2 clear on this whole thing but if u write me maybe I'll understand better.

Yeah i got confused aswell its a good poem just confusing i thought u were tlkin bout sum1 much older than that played wid ur head n got u into sex ..
even at d end u said it its not bout rape so u noticed dat aswell anywaysss im gna give u a five

I THOUGHT THAT UR POEM WAS GREAT. THEY JUST HATIN ON YOUR LOVE PROBABLY. IT WAS GOOD GIRL. NO DISRESPECT TO THE OTHERS THOUGH.

You know I had no problem reading into this poem, and never got the weird vibe off it... its quite beautiful some would say. great write.
-Chuck p.

I was reading this sweet poem a lot and lot and it never fades away from my mind, such a thrilling expression written in a soft manner.

Shirani Graham