Rachel
You did a wonderful job on this Pantoum form. How sad the way things have destroyed so many of the tribes that once thrived here.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Fantastic job on the form...beautiful and deep content. I think you've written a winner here!....am I biased? Not a bit....

"Spirit of the Navajo
How hard life has become
Reciting prayers of long ago
Alcohol an escape for some"

^Like yin and yang...the opposites in spirit and corruption that runs through the Native American history

"Water is a scarcity
Wells will soon run dry
Look at them with pity
How could one not cry"

^ I like the meaning behind this and the lovely metaphor....the tears and the well....awesome!

Well done! 5/5