Comments : Waiting

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    You always need to go back over any write that contains appostrophies or quotation marks as he program translates them as strange symbols. I feel this would be better if broken down from prose format to standard verse, this way the rhythm can be better felt and corrected if needed.

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    You need to go back and edit it for your punctuation marks that this program has problems with.
    I'm not much for rhyming prose, more conventional(old) but I feel your metre goes off in a couple places.
    third sentence change "co" to "so"

  • 15 years ago

    by Whip

    Thanks for your advice