This poem really captured something in my heart it spoke words that were not written, I love the message and really feal like you wrote of the essane of something very special.

Gosh that was very heartfelt, its so sad nd it really touches my heart. the message was truly appreciated and expressive 5/5

I have to say that I honestly wasn't expecting these.Usually when people ask me to read and comment poems about birthdays or what not I usually get bored with it.I don't rate it harshly it's just usually not my genre.But this was fantasic.The emotions were expressed well and the flow was nearly flawless.The word choice was great and it was beautifully written.5/5

-amber-

Man that was very heartfelt and was a really great i enjoyed reading this

This was absolutely outstanding in every single way. I loved how you used your words with hers and made them one. Absolute perfection.... 5/5 GG23