For I was never alive
till I was drowned.
And I was always lost
Until, by you i was found.

^^^Such a beautiful stanza:)
This poem was tipped by a friend and she is right: your poem is a beauty!
Keep writing:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

I think i read this poem A LOT, sometimes it made me wanna cry! sometimes it made me smile! but mostly speechless...

This is so soft & romantic... seems that u've been through some tough times both of you to finaly be with each other

I wish i could guide you through naked fields to the truth.
But you were not there with me beneath his stare
You were not pounded against, ripped till bare.
And I was not there when you were forced to your knees
I was not there with you to lie alone and bleed.

^^i'm sure that behind this part is a lot of pain, but then all you want is his love and u're ready for it

this poem wierdly touched me

And under the night's spherical glow
For true love's howl, I won't say no.

^^clear in this part that u'll hold on to that love no matter what and u'll never let go which is beautiful

For I was never alive
till I was drowned.
And I was always lost
Until, by you i was found.

^^the best part....so romantic as i said

keep writing, i enjoyed it...