This one is amazing !!!
I'm really frustrated it has only 3 votes (before mine :P haha)
it really deserves more than this, you should know that !!
I love the conflict in it, the contradictory in words !!!
veryyy well done, i totally love it =]], think I'm gonna save it on my pc !!
Keep it up
xxx

There is so much resignation in your words...very sad and still...a very good poem! My friends at the poetry club were right;)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Sweet poem dude!! =)