Very well put. I write with a similar rhyming patern. Much emotion was shown through out the peice, and your message was sent out to the reader clearly. Great job, 5/5.

-mandy :)

I loved how the title and scheme matched the poem! Amazing!

Awww.....

I can't even begin to make a comment on this. It must REALLY hurt.... Stay strong. You can do it.

I reread this....

It kills me that this was written by you.
Tough times, no doubt.

You kept this very real. Very heart breaking.
Great depths written here Trav.

If I could vote again, I'd give it 5/5. 1/5 because it's so sad but 5/5 because I know you well.