Good word flow but not my cup of tea.

I think my cup runneth over with praise on this work of yours. bravo on what words you chose to outline such a horrible picture. It must be sad to have to feel these words and then let them out on paper where they bleed and suffer for all to see. I hope that someday the blood will be bleached from the pages where only peace will blossum.

Wow.. Very powerful. I felt as if I were around a campfire with my brethren in medieval times. Nice work, Grant.. R

I was meaning to comment on this poem but have just been so busy. wow this was such a down right awesome poem. i take my hat off 4 yet another master piece. your words were so eery and haunting i absolutely loved it. it was so dark and just filled with so much power and depth. great job!!

Haha when you told me you had a darker poem than the previous one I read I didn't believe you but then I read this poem and WOWW! It's so powerful and full of emotion and it's so dark. It scared me a bit because you mentioned that there was a story behind it and that got me very curious so I continued to read but now Im afraid of what the story really is :/
Your imagery was very good and the words you used leaves an impact on the reader. Well it did on me anyway!! I love the fact that you used Shakespearean language it made the poem very interesting and different to other poems that we may see on this site. It was a change :) Thanks for the read.
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This poem had some great word choice, I have to agree with that. It really gives the reader a detailed visual. Very vivid descriptions. The wording was the Shakespearean language, which I find hard to read at times.. yet that made the poem unique and I love how you did that with this poem. Anyways, very dark poem.. you did a great job with this. 5/5.

I understood the metaphore before the readon of the last sentence about the goverment , and , if there would be 1 wolf i would do the same as you did , but honesly no matter how many wolfs we will slay

there would be more and more coming
with everyone you kill 2 will rise from the horizon and money my friend and power and turn magicly a lam to a wolf in a sec

and you knwo what i mean

very good poem

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I understood the metaphore before the readon of the last sentence about the goverment , and , if there would be 1 wolf i would do the same as you did , but honesly no matter how many wolfs we will slay

there would be more and more coming
with everyone you kill 2 will rise from the horizon and money my friend and power and turn magicly a lam to a wolf in a sec

and you knwo what i mean

very good poem

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