This was indeed a poem with a warm suicidal thought, amazing as ever that reflects the pain of a frustrated mind, well written, I love dark thoughts and poems... and this one was a plot written so well...Keep it up

....Anonymous

I haven't read your work in a while, and I'm regretting... very very great write, I especially like the phase : Be it life or yet another play of fate..
absolutely awesome!

Wow this was so beautiful and yet so sad. You did such a great job with thie piece. I havent read from you in awhile so this was nice.

A blade soon to be the most trustworthy friend,
Never once denying or declining the pain soon to engulf.
Each cut so desperately made though an artwork soon to create,
Be it life or yet another play of fate?

^^^I loved this stanza. It really spoke to me. I can really relate to what you've written in this piece. So much emotion, I truly loved it. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Wow this was so beautiful and yet so sad. You did such a great job with thie piece. I havent read from you in awhile so this was nice.

A blade soon to be the most trustworthy friend,
Never once denying or declining the pain soon to engulf.
Each cut so desperately made though an artwork soon to create,
Be it life or yet another play of fate?

^^^I loved this stanza. It really spoke to me. I can really relate to what you've written in this piece. So much emotion, I truly loved it. 5/5
~Forever Broken~