Comments : Summers Heat

  • 15 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    5/5 this is a great poem.
    very discriptive
    u can see images
    really cute :)

  • 15 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Woundreful display of poerty. you portray the seasons with such vivid feeling, and blend it with love so smoothly with ur flow.
    real good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned! Vivid picture painting imagery and impeccable flow! Well thought out and void of forced rhyming!! Excellent, Excellent, Excellent!!!! ~~claps~~

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana
    What a passionate poem of love. Your imagery painted a very vivid image of a wonderful summer love.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Lakota

    That was amazing!!! and soooo cute!!!! 5/5 all the way!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by unspokken

    Wow!
    Alot of imagery there, and brillant word choice.
    I think that it is so omantic the way that you talked about the whole year around. It is one of my favorite poems.

  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    This was the perfect antidote to a chilly winter afternoon. A pleasure to read.