Wow!!!! I can sing this but I think that's because it's suppose to be like a song? Very sweet and heartfelt, the ryme and flow was flawless and like always, very beautiful! :]

You're an amazing writer and you're always surprising me, nice nice job :]

Wow!!!! I can sing this but I think that's because it's suppose to be like a song? Very sweet and heartfelt, the ryme and flow was flawless and like always, very beautiful! :]

You're an amazing writer and you're always surprising me, nice nice job :]

5/5

Absolutely flawless. I saw nothing wrong with this. It was simple, sweet, and to the point. You did a beautiful job. Flow and everything was amazing. Rhyme, ect. :] Well done hunn. Keep it upp. 5/5.. (:

Nice poem. the way u write it sooo sweet.

Loved it! Just a sweet and simple love poem that speaks to the heart with its true emotions. You expressed the love you feel and how you two should be together nicely and it all flowed flawlessly. It was straight to the point yet packed with meaning. The style you wrote in was wonderful and you pulled it off nicely. Nothing left to say but that I enjoyed it and read it a couple of times because it was so sweet. :]

Well done.
*5/5*

I am in awe of this form, so much so that I would like to try and will when I get the chance.

Let me get this right..the form is not simply to repeated rhyme, but in fact the repeated lines in that specific order, right?

I feel this will prove more of a challenge than it appears!

Well done on a great example of this form.

Michael