"And you, my love, are the lights in the room,
Glorious sunshine pouring through the window.
The heat on my skin just as you are now,
Wrapping you arms around me."

^ this is beautiful

"This is what I call, bliss."

the comma before bliss makes the word stick out, gets your point across so well

i have no criticism for this piece whatsoever, 5/5

Oh wow , this is lovely . I love the imagery in your poems . I think you're very talented , and I hope your poetry takes you somewhere . 5/5 .

Good poem... I like it
Keep up this good work...

I loved this poem. Just loved. Good work. Keep writering.

OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!