Nice one Mr. A! 5/5

I'm glad you finally found your long lost writing abilities. Great work. It was a very emotional poem. I loved it.

Uhm wow still amazing at this stuff!!! =]]] it's been a while since i got to get on so i haven't been able to read anyone's poems or talk to em so how've you been love??? but good poem once again =]]]

:)
I love the feeling in this poem. Its pretty intense. That may sound lame, but it is just how I feel.

5/5

I like this poem a lot :)

ILOVE THIS POEM ITS SPEAKS ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENS WHEN A GIRL LEAVES...
i love it :)

Really great poem, I can feel the pain of her leaving just with your words. every line is well written