Comments : He sometimes listens

  • 12 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Masterful and cunning. Excellent choice of verbage. Your work has come a long way and you started with much talent. Great poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    Your imagery is outstanding! I can see the sunlight through dripping leaves,Like a beautiful picture that stays forever in your mind.You are very talented!

  • 12 years ago

    by Raychil

    I thought this poem was very peaceful. Just sad, but still a peacfulness fills me. The realization at the end was amazing. I thought it was beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sean

    Be proud of it, it's a stunning work :)

  • 9 years ago


    Well done! Impeccable flow and astounding imagery!
    I especially liked this part:

    the fantastic bittersweetness of unshared heat.

    Truly awesome write!

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is phenomenal. I love the flow amd how unique each description and thought was. I really enjoyed the way your voice shines through each and every word.