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by Bill Turner
Masterful and cunning. Excellent choice of verbage. Your work has come a long way and you started with much talent. Great poem.
Your imagery is outstanding! I can see the sunlight through dripping leaves,Like a beautiful picture that stays forever in your mind.You are very talented!
I thought this poem was very peaceful. Just sad, but still a peacfulness fills me. The realization at the end was amazing. I thought it was beautiful.
Be proud of it, it's a stunning work :)
by HOLLY ARMER
Well done! Impeccable flow and astounding imagery!
I especially liked this part:
the fantastic bittersweetness of unshared heat.
Truly awesome write!
This piece is phenomenal. I love the flow amd how unique each description and thought was. I really enjoyed the way your voice shines through each and every word.