Comments : Alone

  • 15 years ago

    by Skyfire

    "We fight and strive
    To save that light inside
    But truth be told
    We all grow cold."

    A depressing poem, yet still well-worded at the same time.

  • 15 years ago

    by Roxy

    AHHHH!! Like I told you!!
    You are not deleting it ^^
    Please big bro for me!!
    My favorite two lines were "In this world all our solaces are fleeting
    And our hearts are barely beating"
    This one just honestly caught my eye and I fell in love with the "barly beating" part :D
    I love you mucho MWAHH xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Shannon Pyscotic

    Very well-written.
    Short and simple.
    It was a great poem