Oh my... Layla! Do you have any idea how brilliant this piece is?!?! Each words catches me right in the heart; I cannot believe how magnificent this poem is... especially the last stanza. :) My breath has officially been taken ;)

Oh my... Layla! Do you have any idea how brilliant this piece is?!?! Each words catches me right in the heart; I cannot believe how magnificent this poem is... especially the last stanza. :) My breath has officially been taken ;)

A few too many fillers but aside from that, it is beautifully penned. Clever how you end each stanza. Good job!

Absolutely brilliant! I loved it.