Comments : It's not fair

  • 12 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I am so impressed with this poem. You know it touched my heart on every level. You did such a good job relaying the feeling of anyone that has lost a love one to war. You feel our hearts and for that I thank you from all of us that are in pain.
    This was written with love, respect and with heart. Thanks again . It will be treasured .
    A wonderful write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rodney Kirby

    CRYSTAL DID THEY GIVE YOU A FLAG, IM SORRY I KNOW ITS A SORE SUBJECT

  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    A wonderful write,the shock,the sadness,everything comes through with your words. Reaches the heart!

  • 11 years ago

    by ShyandHurt

    That really made me stop and think. How incredible you worded this poem. So...sad to make you want to stop reading but at the same time you can't stop reading. Astounding word choice and slow. Brilliant.