Wow great poem i love this. adding to favs!

ryme and flow was very nice.

you could name it " ultimate sin"?

Call it the "Ultimate Sin" Good poem by the way. Have not heard from you latly, well here is my shout out to you. hope you have a good day and stuff. lol. night and morn.

Nicely constructed... it's good to read. a different and good poem!