Very emotional poem, i love it

So much feeling!! good job!

Maybe later,
Is that all I can say?
That it may be better one day?
Thats too hard, not even real,
It's hard to forget the pain I feel,

^^ this is my favourite stanza, i think.

Maybe I don't want to forget about you,
I don't want to give up, pull through,
I'm sorry, I'll forever hold on,
Even though your still gone...

^^ actually this one is. this is a great ending.

wow makalah this is real good. it has a lot of emotion in it and i like the repitition.

good write..
i know i don't have to tell you this, but keep up the amazing work.

~me.