Dear Paul,

This is such a sweet poem!
I hope and think your little girl will make it through:)
If she had her daddies strenght, she will for sure!
It is so good to read you again, I have missed you so much.

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Such a beautiful name for a little girl.
The poem is wonderful. It is filled with feelings that the reader can feel. I Love the last line, it is wonderful.

I could so relate to this. It was sincere and heartfelt,a wonderful write.

First things first, I want to wish your little girl the very best, she certainly sounds like a fighter and with the love of her parents she'll go from strength to strength. Go girl!!

Now the poem. I have written plenty of similar poems. My son is now 7 and his start in life rocky to say the least. He spent his first 8 months in hospital and his journey was a real roller coaster ride, much of this I have documented in the form of poetry.
One small observation, possibly a typo? Preying should be praying :)
It is a written to and about your daughter, an honest write, full of sincere wishes from a doting dad and mum too. I totally relate - well done.

If you need any words of wisdom, please feel free to PM me.

Best of luck to you all.

Michael

Great poem pj...... u got sooo much love.. if only she knew =(

This was such a beautiful poem.

i'm not sure if you meant to do this or not, but the very first of the poem didn't rhyme but the rest did?

You were born so early and small,
there was so many things to fear,
that minute i was the happiest man,
and you cant even imagine how scared,

but either way it was still a wonderful poem and i wish you and your family the best. god bless.

This is beautiful.. and so sad.. I hope she makes it through..

Ur poem is relly good i mean it from da bottom of mah heart!! im sry i cnt relate to it but i kinda hav a feeling to wat r r going trough my friend went trough da same...but i hope wit all mah heart dat ur baby grl will ok..i will keep her in my prayers every night
LoKa

Did she live? is she okay? this poem is amazingg it made me tear up horribly<333

That made me cry. You make sure you tell her everyone is prayinf for you and I know she will make it!