That was beautiful. you've given the reader an idea of what the world (or relationship) would be like without any hate, screaming, lies, pity. to fall so deeply in love that every insecurity or fear that you once possessed disappears into nothing but a distant memory, in an alternate world. This was wonderfully penned, a definite 5.

- Jess

I can only give this a short comment so as to not impede on its worth.

Pure and flawless

5/5