Comments : The Voice Inside One's Head

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    "Swimming in the blood
    Your reflection, crimson red
    But the eyes that stare on back at you
    Is of the voice inside your head"

    ^^I want to say something really brilliant abaout this beause it really is worth tht. but it almost made me cry...god knows that...i don't know. : / the voice has to stay inside your head and that's one of the hardest parts. you can't talk bout it no matter how hard you try. . .

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    I loved this poem. powerful and emotional. very good. 5/5

    --aprilsconspiracy

  • 15 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    This is my top fave of your poems they are all so good ! 5/5