Comments : Remember That Night?

  • 15 years ago

    by Shotput Girl

    I really like this. It was heartfelt and I can see where you're coming from. Hearing someone say that they love you is a wonderful thing.

  • 15 years ago

    by jojo

    Oh my, i really enjoyed this poem because it was really good and flowed well. especially the stanza:
    You had my heart in overdrive
    Your voice made me feel so alive.
    I loved the way you kissed my lips;
    The way that you moved between my hips.

    good writing 5/5!