Tammie,

this is so full of emotion, frustrated emotion. How can you keep hold of something that refuses to hold on. You communicate in such a delicate way that ironically screams to me. I feel that this is a difficult balance to attain, but you have done so admirably.

Say goodbye to the roving eye ;)

Well done

Michael

I swear I've commented this already. Damnitt.

Okay so I really like this, it's full of hurt and .. anger? almost. It's great. Only some of the words I would change, but we're all still improving, right?
You are definatly improving, and how I wish you would WRITE MORE. Ha.
5/5

I love you,
jess ~

WRITE MORE! It's been nearly 20 days since this was submitted.

I love you <3