Thanx for viewing my submission,
I hope you'll read some of my
future posts..

I only wnated to say that the same thing has happend to me.
Thanks for writing it down
You've shown my past two years.

No problem! just want it to let it out :)

This was very beautiful!!!

Well, dear Mark,

Your poem has a good flow and rhyming to it.
As far as the message is concerned: love is magical and no one really knows how it starts, but we all know when it ends. You can feel it in all the other one does and says.
However hard it may be, sometimes all you can do is move on, sweetheart:)
Keep writing, I will be back for more!

Take care,

Ingrid 5/5

Very sweet and a great job.
:D
-alyssa

Are u filipino? this poem is amazing!!5/5

Nice attempt and Gret effort to express those feelings of love and binding..

Thank you for all the comments.

I just logged back in after a long period of
rest. I'll be writing once again please keep track

God Bless!