I must say, i actually kind of really like this..
it seems like there is a hidden meaning like really really deep yet it seems like you are giving everything there is to think it could be just by the words... :S if that makes sense....

( : i like it, good job

Truly darkness....but awesome

Great poem. Lots of emotion. i could actually feel ur pain 5/5

DEEEEEEEPPPPPPP Write very emotional, very good keep it up.......

Oooch this poem cuts so deep :)

This is short but meaningful. Excellent job.