Comments : Gone With Luck

  • 15 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    3am 6pm no difference.
    "climbed the highest mountain,
    then it crumbled in a storm."
    As soon as i read that i knew that it was going to be another shocker and only 4 stanzas and im still amazed

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well, it made sense and not only that, it was a very good poem too!
    I loved how you used so few filler words, really awesome!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Excellent poem and an enjoyable, i do some of my best poems in the early hours, it seems to me you had quite a bit of luck with this poem.LOL

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by ruth

    I am blown away. you should write at 3 am more often.

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    It rhymed really well and had a steady beat. i really like reading it! and 3am is the ONLY time both you and i write

  • 14 years ago

    by ruth

    I loved it !!! BTW thanks for the comment !!

  • 14 years ago

    by military man

    Wow beautiful content language is jus walla.