What a powerful piece. Excellent collaboration between you two. Good flow and word choice. Good rhyme scheme, it makes perfect sense without forced rhyming. A well thought out and thought provoking write!

Kay you and Bob did a wonderful job on this collab....It is hard to keep a dry eye while reading it.....thinking of everything taken away from the Native Americans.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Such a touching piece. I read it many times over and each time I felt your words even more. Touching !

You have both penned an amazing write that deserves to be on the front pages.

True what we did was wrong but we (nation) were young and hungry and of course we know better than others. Well done good word flow and imagery.

Congrats on your win :)
Love you
Cindy

A very nice tribute to my ancestors and the injustices done to them. Thank you.

An accurate evocation of too many tragic truths...

ExTreme!!!!!!!!

Beautiful, well-written poem, very evocative
and heartfelt

A wonderfully crafted yet sad reminder about the the dark side of human greed. Using its self righteousness to justify its oppression for its own material gain. When will it end?

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