Comments : Blackened.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ali Khan

    Honestly, i didn't understand the real meaning its beyond my level of thinking, bt i somehow drove out my own meaning from it but thts what creativity is! simple words but having a lot of meanings and yea u used beautiful words that makes your poem even more beautiful. a vote for u..love your work, keep writing......

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow! It's my first time readin a poem that discusses such issue? It reflects ur purity.. I like it very much! Keep it up 5/5
    regards,