Comments : World Excluded

  • 11 years ago

    by thehangman

    A very good point brought up and another great ryming job. Well done!

  • 11 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    I love every single line.. and especially the last one...
    This one is definitely on my favorite list!

  • 11 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Wow. Different and eye catching.
    It had a unique message I thought.
    Very well done.
    5/5 for sure.
    Keep it up