I love this poem it's amazing your a good writer

I love this poem it's amazing your a good writer

"we bathe in the moon light" tht is such a perfect ending. this is a really good poem and its so lovy dovy.

rest their head on my a love so pure

this line right here didnt really make sense to me but over-all i like this poem

I dare to disagree... :) Your poem is amazing... I only used more metaphors lol
In fact, I would actually say yours is better... It feels more real... =)
Loved your comparison with fireflies, it's really wonderful...

*smile*

I loved yur poem, when i was reading it felt real to me.... my favorite part of the poem is the ending it was awesome!!

<3
Dominique

I like it♥ :)

I like it♥ :)